The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart compares ten highest-ranking countries in terms of electricity generated and consumed in 2014. Units are measured in billion kWh.

Overall, all the countries except Germany produced more than they consumed. The largest production and consumption of electricity was found in China while Korea, Rep. generated and consumed least amount of electricity.

China was the world largest electricity producer and consumer with over 5,000 billion kWh each. It was followed by the USA, which generated over 4,000 and consumed around 3,900 billion kWh, while Russia was responsible for one-fourth of that amount, at just over 1,000 billion kWh. Japan and India had similar figures, between 856,7 and 1,057 billion kWh, while Canada, France, Brazil ranged between nearly 460 to over 600 billion kWh. It is noticeable that although Germany was the only country which produced only 526,6 billion kWh, it consumed slightly more than 582 billion kWh. Korea, Rep. accounted for the smallest levels of production and consumption, namely approximately 485 and 450 billion each.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...consumed in 2014. Units are measured in billion kWh. Overall, all the countries exce...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumed the least'.
Suggestion: consumed the least
...n China while Korea, Rep. generated and consumed least amount of electricity. China was th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47904191617 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64270703305 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 142.848428306 43.030603864 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144854407986 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994333979627 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10822495108 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154957809319 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943607797546 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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