The bar chart shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. Summarise the information wherever relevant
The given bar chart illustrates the predicted sales of jeans across two companies namely Mango co. and Jack & Jones co. in turkey for next year. Transactions are measured in thousands of pairs.
Overall, the chart observes the upward trend in sales of jeans. Furthermore, turkish customers are predicted to purchase more jeans from Jack and Jones co.
Going forward, Mango's sales will increase between January to August by 350,000 pairs. Following this, they will plateau until November and will finally show a positive rise in december, to end the year with approximately 600000 pairs.
In terms of Jack and Jones, they will begin and end the year outselling Mango by approximately 300,000 pairs. However, sales will dip in February to nearly 250000 pairs, before increasing to around 400,000 pairs in June.Interestingly, sales are expected to stagnate until August. Jack and Jones co. will more than recover in september and october, by selling 600,000 pairs of jeans in both the months. In the subsequent months, a steady rise is predicted and sales will hit a peak of nearby 900,000 by the close of the year.
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...rom Jack and Jones co. Going forward, Mangos sales will increase between Janua...
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...August by 350,000 pairs. Following this, they will plateau until November and wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11413043478 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69534132623 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3076923077 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3846153846 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198974162394 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836845228508 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108330733323 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143819936889 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109070348398 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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