The two bar charts provide the information about consumption of energy sources of USA and UK percentage wise in the years 2000 and 2006.
Overall, at the beginning of the period, consumption of oil was the highest percentage for the USA and coal was the majority for the UK. However, at the end of the period, oil remaining the highest consumed with almost half of the percentage in USA and gas was the highest used by UK.
The consumption of gas was around a quarter in UK and 15% in USA in the year 2000 and experienced a growth of about 40% in UK and 35% in USA by 2006. Moreover, the consumption of oil and other renewable resources were remained almost unchanged in both the years.
In converse, the coal consumption is almost one-third in UK and USA being at around 35% in 2000, but in the year 2006 the consumption of coal experienced downward trend to about 14% in UK and 25% in USA, similarly, the nuclear power fell from around 15% in UK and 10% in USA to around 8% in UK and 6% in USA after 6-year period.
- The chart shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia Darwin 1 Sydney 2 Melbourne 3 Brisbane 4 Perth 5 and Canberra 6 in October 2009 and October 2010 73
- The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining teacher training qualifications in 2005 6 and 2006 7 and the proportion of male qualifiers Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wh 67
- The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance Why do people do operations to change the way they look Do you think it is a positive or negative development 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes Do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, similarly, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34375 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58280824637 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432291666667 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5557257102 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259553230227 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156226667779 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122621635365 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206504274169 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117024685479 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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