Bar graph
The bar graph illustrates the percentage kilometres travelled by five types of transportation (such as; bicycle, motorbike, air, bus, rail) in the great Briton. The measures are given in billions.
Focusing on the bar graph, it is overt that more than 40 millions passenger kilometres travelled by bus in 1990; being higher than those who travelled by air, which was approximately one billion in 1990. Similarly, those people decreased slightly to 40 billions who opted to travelled by air. Furthermore, there was the same number of passenger who travelled by bus and rail in 2000, which was roughly less than 50 millions in UK.
Moving further, less number of passenger kilometres were travelled by bicycle and motorbike, it was less than five billions in the both year 1990 and 2000. Apart from that, a slight increase was normally found in air travel by 2000. In 1990, a total number of 100 passenger kilometer were travelled by surved transport method, while, a more than 110 passengers kilometres who travelled by surved transportation in 2000 in UK.
Overall, it can be eventually understood that the highest number of passengers kilometres were travelled by bus and rail, if compared to other mode of transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...n 1990, a total number of 100 passenger kilometer were travelled by surved transport meth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, similarly, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12437810945 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94236443656 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542288557214 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1812646858 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094862499908 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471825119669 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895212205887 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811383578787 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924448643037 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.