The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began
The bar chart and the line graph demonstrate about the number of participants in the Olympics classified by gender and outline its trend from the beginning of 1924 to the end of 2012.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of male participants greatly outnumbered female participants and the upward trends for partaking in the Olympics seemed to soar progressively until the end of the period.
The first chart indicates that in 1924, exactly 3000 men joined the competition while the number of women in the same year was too mere to state the accurate statistic. 24 years later, more men were interested in entering the Olympics that the number went up substantially to nearly 4500 and continue to soar rapidly to over 5000 people in 1984. The quantity of female contestants also showed a considerable increase when it had risen from approximately 500 to 1500 people between 1952 and 1984. The year 2012 witnessed the most significant boom ever when women entering the competition skyrocketed steeply by 3300 contestants in just 28 years whereas the growth in male participants was moderately lower( increased by nearly 800 people)
Turning to the graph which outlined that the development of Olympics participant had gone up upwardly from 1924 to 1984, reaching the point of nearly 7000 contestants before drastically shot up to its peak at the end of the period with 10000 people recorded.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atly outnumbered female participants and the upward trends for partaking in the O...
^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd continue to soar rapidly to over 5000 people in 1984. The quantity of female c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, whereas, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02155172414 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85194707359 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.17297095 43.030603864 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.166666667 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6666666667 22.9334400587 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154076152131 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797576608269 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604622971296 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109374856685 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489100976018 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atly outnumbered female participants and the upward trends for partaking in the O...
^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd continue to soar rapidly to over 5000 people in 1984. The quantity of female c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, whereas, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02155172414 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85194707359 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.17297095 43.030603864 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.166666667 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6666666667 22.9334400587 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154076152131 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797576608269 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604622971296 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109374856685 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489100976018 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.