The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.

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The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.

The chart represents the changes in global sales in three electronic items (Games software, DVD/Videos and CDs) from 2000 to 2003. Units are measured in billions of dollars.
Overall, the sales volume of games software increased over the year and CDs were the most sold items in terms of its sales amount. It is interesting to note that, the sales volume for CDs decreased slowly and steadily whereas the rest of items experienced increasing trends.
CDs recorded the highest sales in 2000 of 35 billion of dollars, which figure was decreased steadily by about 2 or 3 billion dollars of sales in worldwide until its sales amount reached at approximately 32 billion dollars.
Concurrently, DVD/Videos had the second highest global sales of which volume was recorded at close to 18 billion dollars whereas games software had the lowest global sales of around 11 billion dollars. The sales amount of those two items increased substantially. Over the year the sales amount of DVD/Videos rose to above 30 billion dollars in 2003, the sales for games software remained almost same in the last two consecutive years at around 18 billion dollars.

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Discourse Markers used:
['second', 'so', 'whereas']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290640394089 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.118226600985 0.116061578633 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.064039408867 0.0759168565197 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0443349753695 0.0366838410393 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0147783251232 0.0131127313244 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.162561576355 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0379272487307 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62063443993 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0197044334975 0.0210936926555 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0788177339901 0.0948980150116 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00985221674877 0.00967000014798 102% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1142.0 1161.00487805 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.9 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04232804233 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359788359788 0.337110787985 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275132275132 0.247514529752 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179894179894 0.171178102325 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0952380952381 0.112407865282 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62063443993 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.3104500621 49.3433353143 84% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 23.625 23.0094962315 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9080719697 42.9750493124 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.75 135.714022679 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 23.0094962315 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.689975730869 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.1382275132 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.75 2.94281807926 93% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385041774605 0.418131533498 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186767774588 0.181151798455 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111824031271 0.0850326197045 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.748628119269 0.706616315825 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181467423947 0.157042692854 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211872078449 0.228904883108 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871146167322 0.108899403657 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380522450798 0.367819155151 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0840174114736 0.0812612215331 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272698356697 0.316326947829 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045678729074 0.0921553760075 50% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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