The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
The provided bar graph compare the percentage of science qualification held by people in Malaysia and Singapore. As is presented in the graph, no qualification in science gets the highest number of people in these country.
At a closer look to the figure, it can be seen that the lower percentage of people hold science qualification which is Master's Degree. It just approximately 5 % in Malaysia and Singapore. The condition of qualification same as these country. People hold Bachelor's degree in Malaysia 20 %. It is higher than Malaysia which gets 10 %.
In Malaysia, the participation to join leaving exams in science increases than in Singapore. Approximately people reach 35 % in Malaysian and 30 % in Singapore. The Highest percentage is no qualification in science. We find in Malaysia up to 60 % till 65 % and in Singapore in 60 %
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11678832117 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27260091758 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8140241004 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7272727273 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4545454545 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189503716279 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765097011156 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674019177026 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148979704706 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680684614173 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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