The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

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The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

The bar chart depicts the details about the percentage of people who had done the masters' degree, Bachelor's degree, school-leaving exams and No qualification in science between Malaysia and Singapore.

Overall, Malaysia had the maximum number of both No qualifications in science and school-leaving exam compared with Singapore. In contrast, Singapore had the highest number of bachelor's degree than Malaysia where the Master's degree for both the countries had the same trend.

Malaysia had around 65% of no qualifications in science and clearly indicates that qualification of science is 5% less than Singapore. Most of the people are leaving exam in school, Malaysia had more than two fifths and below half, while Singapore had less number compared with Malaysia with less than a third.

On the other hand, Singapore had 20% of bachelor's degree where Malaysia had exactly half of the Singapore number. Both the countries had a similar number for the master's degree with less than one in twenty.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30625 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84690072711 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45625 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0839300216 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12771223401 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748294669223 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073505106977 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954783244921 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745801656602 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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