The Chart below gives information about the UK ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of population aged 65 and over, in different countries in 1985 and with the estimation of 2035. The data calibrated in percentage.
Have a look on the England, in 1985, the population was recorded only less than a fifth while, till 2035 it would be reached on just above a 20%. In case of wales, the higher proportion will observed about a quarter in further years whereas, 10% population was exactly identified in 1985 as compare to the former years.
By having a glance on Scotland and Northern Ireland, the population of both countries lie between 12% and 14% in initial year however, it will stable on 25% in the upcoming years. Afterwards, the population of UK was increasing with the difference of 9% in previous years.
Overall, the percentage of population who aged 65 and over, will incline with the comparison of earlier time.
- The bar chart below shows shares of expenditure for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year of 2009. 78
- The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. 73
- The graph below shows relative rates of language acquisition according to different study methods 75
- There are more new towns being built now a days It is important to include public park and sports facilities than shopping centre for individuals to spend their free time To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries Some people think student only need to get primary education while others think secondary education is necessary What s your opinion 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'observe'
Suggestion: observe
...se of wales, the higher proportion will observed about a quarter in further years wherea...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83443708609 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79146732237 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8432035015 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214545374934 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093938262044 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669976681838 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127740898573 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509160185623 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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