The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035.
The bar graph depicts that data is given about britain's older population in 1985 and expectation about it in 2035.
Overall, the trend represents the percentage of population aged 65 and over is fluctuate between 1985 and 2035. Wales had highest aged population in 1985 which it will expected that this nation will had highest older population in 2035.
Firstly, According to UK and England, the percentage of population was exactly same in 1985 and the prediction will show that it will increase in 2035 by 8% . Afterward, Wales had figure for older population accounted for about 16% and will rise to 26% in 2035 .Compared with 14% population in Scotland in 1985 then it will increase with 11% in 2035%.
However, only 12% people live in northern Ireland who were over 65 years that was lowest figure over the period between 1985 and 2035. While it will predicted that it will anticipated that proportion of population experience an increase drastically in 2035 which will third highest share in 2035.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fluctuated'.
Suggestion: fluctuated
...ntage of population aged 65 and over is fluctuate between 1985 and 2035. Wales had highes...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
... fluctuate between 1985 and 2035. Wales had highest aged population in 1985 which it will e...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'expect'
Suggestion: expect
...t aged population in 1985 which it will expected that this nation will had highest older...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... it will expected that this nation will had highest older population in 2035. Fi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...show that it will increase in 2035 by 8% . Afterward, Wales had figure for older p...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r about 16% and will rise to 26% in 2035 .Compared with 14% population in Scotland...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Compared
...about 16% and will rise to 26% in 2035 .Compared with 14% population in Scotland in 1985...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...ern Ireland who were over 65 years that was lowest figure over the period between 1985 and...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... over the period between 1985 and 2035. While it will predicted that it will anticipa...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'predict'
Suggestion: predict
...od between 1985 and 2035. While it will predicted that it will anticipated that proportio...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'anticipate'
Suggestion: anticipate
...5. While it will predicted that it will anticipated that proportion of population experienc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97647058824 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59255008832 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3861278753 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297975795072 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163368442991 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522311051539 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205288723323 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475846544789 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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