The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas.
The bar chart illustrates that the increase in population in different region of the nation between 1970 to 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the trend for population increased in all given cities from 1970 to 2010. Whereas, Tokyo had the highest population throughout the period while Jakarta had the lowest one. We can see the drastic changes in Bombay during the 40 years of period.
As the graph shows, In terms of Tokyo, the figure for the population accounted for about 16 millions that increased by 10 million which was the highest figure of population over the period as well as other than four cities. Regarding New York, it had only under 15 billion humans but there was gradual increase untill 2010 to 17 million people. The number of people for Shanghai stood at 12 million by following 20 years it rose slightly with 1 million before experiencing an accelerate the population ended up above 20 million in 2010.
According to Bombay, only 5 millions dwellers lived but the trend for the population rocketed to 26 million which was slight lower than Tokyo in 2010. Lastly, the figure number of population accounted for about 3 million in 1970 compared with 9 million in 1990 and 19 million in 2010
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in all given cities from 1970 to 2010. Whereas, Tokyo had the highest population throu...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...htly with 1 million before experiencing an accelerate the population ended up above 20 millio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, regarding, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79523809524 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48097066075 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4836831413 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123523728201 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637149952217 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437193906032 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938951004474 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212202155716 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.