The chart below show reason why people go to work NY bicycle or car.

Essay topics:

The chart below show reason why people go to work NY bicycle or car.

The pie chart below compares different reasons why workers comute to officer by cycling or by driving. Overall, both bicycle and car are means of transportation, staffs who cycling has health and fitness, less pollution as their major reasons while comfort has the highest proportion driving to work place.

Maintaining good health and fitness alongside less pollution are considered are the main reasons workers comute to work by bicycles with each reasons having the same ratio of 30%. On the other hand, two fifths of some workers choose to drive down to office because of comfort which take precedence over other reasons, a little above a fifth transport by car due to distance from their residence to workplace.

Transportation by car was chosen by some because it's faster than cycling and there may be need to move some loads to office at the rate of 14 percent, respectivel while less than a fifth cycled because it attracts no money, more so no problem of parking space.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of 30%. On the other hand, two fifths of some workers choose to drive down to off...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9578313253 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56109128332 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6395376565 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.6 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184212264632 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111363086528 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744278648055 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129879694211 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944566087594 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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