the chart below show that UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go in to full- time work did after leaving college in 2008
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two charts illustrate the prospect of undergraduates and masters from Britain who is not working with a full-time job in the year 2008.
it can be clearly seen that most of the graduates are pursuing further study. Overall, both of them are not interested in voluntary work.
In 2008, the proportion of further study was highest for the undergraduates, almost 30000 persons wanted. The second high was part-time work, there were 17735 undergraduates. The situation of unemployment was serious for undergraduates, more than 15000 students were taken it. the number of voluntary work was low, only 3500 undergraduates participated with this hobby.
On the other hand, the distance between further study and part-time work was narrowed for the UK masters, there were 2725 and 2535 of them respectively. the proportion of unemployment was the same as the undergraduates as far as the masters, the number of this destination was 1625. Lastly, a few of them were interested in volunteering also, which got 345 only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...with a full-time job in the year 2008. it can be clearly seen that most of the gr...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ere 2725 and 2535 of them respectively. the proportion of unemployment was the same...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, lastly, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17575757576 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14722318467 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7168302482 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105816561087 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449110505505 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445341439407 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077463815914 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491636508532 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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