The chart below showd the annual number of rentals and sales of films from particular store between 2002 and 2011.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... particular store between 2002 and 2011.The data is celebrated in thousands and ye...
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... store between 2002 and 2011.The data is celebrated in thousands and years which ...
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...tal clear that, during 2002 the sales of Rentals,VHS and DVD were 185000,85000and...
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... that, during 2002 the sales of Rentals,VHS and DVD were 185000,85000and 45000 resp...
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...spectively.whereas Blue ray had not sold .After that year, the sale of Rentals and...
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...ectively.whereas Blue ray had not sold .After that year, the sale of Rentals and VHS ...
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...e and DVD sales were rising.furthermore,the sales of Rentals were 120000 and Blue r...
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...000 and Blue ray sales vanished in 2007.But, DVD sales increased to 210000. Apar...
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...n 2011 started Rentals reduced to 65000.Also,VHS sales had sold about zero.DVD sales...
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...11 started Rentals reduced to 65000.Also,VHS sales had sold about zero.DVD sales dec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well, whereas, apart from, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16447368421 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09307795451 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3813772492 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.25 112.824112599 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 22.9334400587 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.25 5.23603664747 310% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321532213972 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226656119219 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942228306794 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202246955113 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967084626331 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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