The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart represents the estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender in six regions listed for the year of 2000.
The gender indicator illustrates that female has bigger rates in illiteracy than male. south asia is where by the fat the most highest illiteracy rates for both female and male at 55% and 35% respectively. arab states comes next<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> with </span>approximately<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> 52% for female and 29% for male, which followed closely by africa at 48% for female and slightly bigger rates than arab for male at 31%. East asia rates dipped </span>half<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> to 20% for female an 9% for male. Meanwhile, latin america illiteracy rates is roughly the same for both gender. developed country lie last with </span>approximately less than<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> 3% illiteracy rates. </span>
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To summarize, world illiteracy rates vary for each regions and genders. roughly speaking, africa, arab and south asia have higher rates above the average, </span>whereas<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> the developed countries, </span>carribean<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">, and </span>oceania<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> have the lower rates under the average.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: South
...s bigger rates in illiteracy than male. south asia is where by the fat the most highe...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereby'?
Suggestion: whereby
... in illiteracy than male. south asia is where by the fat the most highest illiteracy rat...
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Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...ale. south asia is where by the fat the most highest illiteracy rates for both female and ma...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the highest'.
Suggestion: most the highest
...ale. south asia is where by the fat the most highest illiteracy rates for both female and ma...
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Suggestion: Arab
...e and male at 55% and 35% respectively. arab states comes next ^^^^
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Suggestion: Developed
...es is roughly the same for both gender. developed country lie last with approximat...
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Suggestion: Roughly
...ates vary for each regions and genders. roughly speaking, africa, arab and south asia h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.97297297297 4.92477711251 142% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.66117581553 2.65546596893 213% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556756756757 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 81.7875907458 43.030603864 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116667940362 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932872495096 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883922555104 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992443750741 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119807414522 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 10.3012195122 135% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.15 11.4140731707 203% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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