The chart below shows the make and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.
The chart shows male and female fitness membership
from 1970 to 2000. As an overview, that were greater fluctuations in fitness membership among men than women.
The number of male members started the period at just over two thousand and reached highs of four thousand in 1975 and five thousand around 1995. However, the lowest rates were in 1985 and more recently in 2000 when the rate dipped as low as one thousand.
Female fitness membership began lower at one thousand, doubled by 1975 and then fluctuated between two and three thousand for the rest of the period. Further, when male rates at their lowest, female rates were higher. This was particularly true in 1985 when over three thousand women held fitness membership.
To sum up, there were differences in rates of male and female fitness membership in the overall period.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-10 | Thang Tran | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-17 | Komalsandhu | 56 | view |
| 2018-12-27 | Lilis kurnia lestari | 67 | view |
| 2018-12-27 | Zulfikar RH Pohan | 56 | view |
| 2018-12-27 | Vivi Fitriani | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98581560284 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39411867609 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8506390744 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262203733628 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15161549023 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174033161219 0.0843802449381 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211201583885 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153010885554 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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