The chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada
The histogram illustrates four major roots leading to stress among people of different ages in Canada.
Overall, overwork and finance are the main causes of stress for adults aged 25-54; however, as people age, they are less likely to be worried about money and workload problems but have higher tendency to raise concern towards health matters or for non-defined reasons.
The chart clearly communicates that a quarter of people at the age of 25-54 faces stress stemming from heavy workload; this is the most common origin of stress for this age group followed by poor financial stability, at 15%. The similar patterns are carried out among 55-64 aged people with 15% of the 55-64s being anxious about excessive working and 13% of them experiencing stress from unstable financial statement. By contrast, these problems only affect a minority of people above 65, with statistics reaching below 7%.
The majority of those aged over 65 specified no exact reason for stress, at more than 32%, followed by distress resulting from health; this is the second main steam of stress impacting 15% of the 65-74s and 23% of those aged over 75. Conversely, these factors are not of noticeable concern for the youngest group with figure arriving at less than 7%. Likewise, health-related issues are culpable for minor anxiety among the 55-64s, being mentioned by 10% while a higher proportion of these people suffer stress based on no specific reasons, at 17%.
- Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative Discuss the possible arguments on both sides and say which side you personally support 89
- The chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada 92
- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas Other think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style Discuss and give opinion 84
- As the number of cars increases more money has to be spent on road systems Some people think the government should pay for this Others however think that the users should cover the costs Discuss and give your opinion 89
- In some cities there is little control on the design and construction of homes and other buildings and owners can decide on the styles of their houses Do the advantages of this outweigh its drawbacks 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, likewise, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07949790795 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48720047615 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627615062762 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9227367115 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.75 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286788153251 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121704549294 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682505532795 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178302945732 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242291198767 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.