The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years.

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The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years.

The chart illustrates the discrepancies in the quantity of films created five nations in the year of 2007, 2008 and 2009.

Overall, it can be seen that the figure for A was the highest while the second-highest was B. However, three other countries had lower numbers than the top-ranking producers in the industry.

In both 2007 and 2008, the number of films produced by A directors remained stable and this followed by a dip of 5 films in 2009. Viewers living around the world could watch more films from B producers as the statistic of B increased from 50 films in 2007 to 70 films in 2009.

There was a continuous rise in the number of C films, with figure reaching from just under 10 films in 2007 to approximately 20 films in 2009. A decrease could be seen in the D’s film industry from 2007 to 2008 before increasing again in 2009. Although E produced the lowest number of film, the figures for this nation experienced a slight rise, from nearly 10 films in 2007 to just over 12 films in 2009.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A director' or simply 'directors'?
Suggestion: A director; Directors
...d 2008, the number of films produced by A directors remained stable and this followed by a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55737704918 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59000253123 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546448087432 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2294936449 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269706571014 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133751545109 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716400237641 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166925278662 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232577915369 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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