The bar chart above depicts the variations in numbers of teachers according to gender in six different educational institutions in UK in the year 2010. In both nursing and primary schools, female teachers dominate in numbers, with a percentage proportion close to 100% in both schools while their male counterparts lag behind with percentage proportion just below 10% in both schools. However, in the secondary school, the proportion of male teachers increased sharply to almost 50% with proportion of female teachers leading their male counterparts with only few percentage units. In the college level, there is equal porportions of about 50%, both males and females whereas male teachers have taken a slight lead over female teachers in private training institutions. However, in the university level, there is a vast increase in proportion of male teachers, representing 70% while female teachers lag behind with only 30%.
- Nowadays young people spend too much of their time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Films and computer games containing violence are popular now. Some people think they have a negative effect on society and should be banned. Others think they are just a harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 67
- People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. 56
- More and more people are relying on cars as their preferable mode of transport. What are the problems associated with this overdependence .what can be done to control this ? Discuss effects and solutions also ? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38620689655 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86762236464 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.6202633344 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.2 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325156957054 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182237726621 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683598976606 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325156957054 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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