The line graph depicts the information about the price in euros of 800 grams of four different types of bread namely, wholegrain, brown, white, rye bread in the European country between the year 2001 and 2006.
It is crystal clear that, in 2001, wholegrain bread price was the highest, which was around 0.8 euros in the European country whereas the other three bread prices were similar which was about 0.6. After 2001 in the price of wholegrain it showed the upward trend and it reached the peak point price was 1.8 euros in 2002. After it shows the sharp decline to 1 euro in the year 2003. In the next year, it experienced a steady fall in the prices which were below 0.8. At the end of the year, the minimal rises in the price. Brown bread seemed the fluctuation in the whole period. In the initial year, the price of brown bread was Steadily increased by 1.5 after 2003 it started to decline than in the year 2006 prices reached to 1.6.
Furthermore, white bread prices continually rise throughout the period. In the year 2001, the price of the bread was 0.6 grams at the end of the year it reached the 1.4 grams price. Rye bread manifests a downward trend in the initial years. In 2002 the price of rye bread was approximately 0.5 euro. The price was reminded steady between the years 2003 and 2004, which was about 0.6 euro whereas in 2005 the price was slightly raised to 0.6.
Overall, in the early years, wholegrain prices were the highest as compared to others. However, at the end of the year, Brown bread prices were the highest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... steady between the years 2003 and 2004, which was about 0.6 euro whereas in 2005...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54285714286 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19089023002 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.9790578017 43.030603864 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334240472865 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154190769013 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102986245886 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242579030255 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119002498704 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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