the chart below shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed movie genres in us cinemas in 1995, 2000 and 2005 as a percentage of the total earnings of the us film industry for each year
presented is the graph illustrating the beneficial rate of top seven kind of film in the US theaters was a percentage of the full income of the US movie sector in the given three years . Overview, it's clear that the film categories had different percentages about the influx of currency collected; accordingly, it's also noticeable that comedy, drama, action, adventure had the higher percentage of gains than other types.
looking at the graph more closely, in 1995, it was drama that stand out as the most popular genre approximately near 30%, followed by comedy at 20%. compared to comedy in 1995 figure, the animation in1995 figure was around over three times higher. next, in 2000, comedy was the dominant genre, accounting for approximating 25% and drama was the second position with over 20% after action, adventure had 3 and 4 levels, respectively.. besides that, drama earned more benefit than thriller, musicals, animation combined with over 5%, 5 percentages, 3%, respectively. finally, in 2005, adventure grew significantly in 3 years with near 25% (2005), near 15% (1995); therefore, the gap of the type with comedy narrowed by the end of the period. in addition, actin and drama had a downward trend steadily, accounting for near 15% AND 16%, respectively. the figure showed musicals was earned the lowest profits in all seven kinds of movie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, finally, if, look, second, so, therefore, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06726457399 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81247165519 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9044208083 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189861467718 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785908746225 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654038583898 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149045857183 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243209697973 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.