The chart below shows the result of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australians cities

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The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australians cities.

The bar chart illustrates regarding the practice of buying and drinking between coffee and tea in Sydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,Adelaide,Hobart . Generally, it is calibrated into percentage.
From an overall perspective, it can be seen that the rate of selection of buying coffee is fall to lowest for every country while rise and drop erratically can be noticed in other two practice for all five countries.
Now turning back to detail, the first is option having fresh coffee for last 4 weeks. In sydney about 43% of residence, nearly close amount of 42% in Melbourne picked first option while in Brisbane the rate significantly fall to 33%.Residance of Adelaide took 34% same option however, a incline is rendered for Hobart residence.
Adding further, For the second line bought instant coffee in summit people in Hobart of 54%.Nearest amount for Brisbane which is 53%.Although,there is a steady change between Adelaide (49%),Melbourne (48%), and Sydney (46%).
Following the third option ,the top most outcome from Hobart (63%) and Melbourne (63%),while there is a decrease from 61% in Sydney to 56% in Brisbane. However Residence of Aldelaide went outside for coffee about 49% which is the lowest percentage.
To Conclude,it ia worthy enough point out that mos people preferred having tea or coffee in outside rather than making by their selfs.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , Melbourne
...rinking between coffee and tea in Sydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,Adelaide,Hobart . Generally, i...
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Suggestion: , Adelaide
...fee and tea in Sydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,Adelaide,Hobart . Generally, it is calibrated in...
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...ydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,Adelaide,Hobart . Generally, it is calibrated into percen...
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Suggestion: Residance
...bane the rate significantly fall to 33%.Residance of Adelaide took 34% same option howeve...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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... Adelaide took 34% same option however, a incline is rendered for Hobart residenc...
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Suggestion: Nearest
...offee in summit people in Hobart of 54%.Nearest amount for Brisbane which is 53%.Althou...
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...offee in summit people in Hobart of 54%.Nearest amount for Brisbane which is 53%.Althou...
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...earest amount for Brisbane which is 53%.Although,there is a steady change between Adelai...
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... Sydney 46%. Following the third option ,the top most outcome from Hobart 63% and...
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... from Hobart 63% and Melbourne 63%,while there is a decrease from 61% in Sydney t...
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Suggestion: However,
... from 61% in Sydney to 56% in Brisbane. However Residence of Aldelaide went outside for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27570093458 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73406403007 2.65546596893 141% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3218313142 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.444444444 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145447495893 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626678459924 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589551672673 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796261176924 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474996782128 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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