The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
the chart compares the variation in the total number of medals that twelve different countries won in Olympic.
In general terms, there are a fluctuation in the total number of medals in different countries. A can be seen that the number of USA's medals accounted highest than other countries.
It is clear from the chart show that the total number USA's medals won in Olympic( about 2250 medals) that double the total number of Sorit Union'smedals (nearly 1000 medals). In addition, the number of USA's gold medals won( arround 900 medals0) double China's medals (about 450 medals including gold, silver and Bronze).Besides, the total number of Soviet Union's medalsaccounted second location in terms of won medals.
On the other hand, the total number of Japan's medals accountes lowest when compassed with other countries ( only about 300 medals). The total number of medals reduce gradually from UK (about 700 medals), France ( approximately 600 medals), Germany ( nearly 570 medals), Italy ( 500 medals), Sweden ( 490 medals) and Australia ( about 450 medals). As cen be seen that the United States develop significantly in terms of sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, in addition, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12087912088 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56411564623 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9630557739 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442291162507 0.215688989381 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233143718218 0.103423049105 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159071924639 0.0843802449381 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324793980625 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129487950346 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.