The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart presents the export earnings in 5 different areas within an unknown nation over the course of two consecutive years: 2015 and 2016.
Overall, petroleum was the category with the highest revenues, whereas textiles held the lowest rank. It is also conspicuous that all types of products experienced a growth, apart from gems and jewelry during the provided time.
As of the first year, petroleum began with over $60 billions, becoming the top product among the 5. Engineered items came second at around $58 billions. The figure for precious stones and accessories was about two-thirds and farm produce about a half of that for gasoline. Textiles secured the lowest rank, at approximately $25 billions.
Within the second year, all categories witnessed a marginal rise, except for gems and jewelry. Petroleum had an addition of around $3 more billions and still maintained the top position. Engineered products increased around $5 billions and so did textiles. Farming goods went up very slightly: 1%, being equal to the earnings of textiles. It was surprising that gems and jewelry saw a minimal fall of about $2 billions.
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...on. Engineered products increased around billions and so did textiles. Farming go...
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... and jewelry saw a minimal fall of about billions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, third, whereas, apart from, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1912568306 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67510757605 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4099535854 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541989454752 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169781705138 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309868412239 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04205760241 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421604533048 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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