The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
As is illustrated by the chart, five countries are pulled British to migrate in (Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA, and France) during several years. It is measured by thousands.
Overall, Australia is the most country which British emigrate to. Spain is higher than other three countries where British prefer to migrate.
In the first place, Australia was the trend during the period from 2004 to 2006, besides it was pulled in by between 40 thousands and 45 thousands within (2004, 2005, and 2007 respectively), while it remained at a higher migration in 2006 around 52 thousands. In contrast, Spain was slightly different during the above-mentioned years. Also, it attracted by British between (30 thousands to 35 thousands) from (2004 to 2006), while it dripped to 28 thousands in 2007.
In addition, there was a significant different between other three countries. New Zealand was slumped from 23 thousands to 20 thousands throughout the period from 2004 to 2007. Moreover, British migrated to USA in 2004 and 2006 equally by 23 thousands approximately, while migration in 2007 was higher than migration 2005. Additionally, 2005 was the highest year which British migrate to France by 33 thousands and reached its peak. However, during 2004, 2006, 2007 there were fluctuation in migration numbers between 18 thousands to 28 thousands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
As is illustrated by the chart, five cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in contrast, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24186046512 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84528017138 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497674418605 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.5395254651 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13188987597 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578354910824 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328953228774 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889935920991 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200448773035 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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