It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university, while others claim that a university education should be a universal right.
Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion.
People argue about the number of students who go to colleges and universities, but other thinks that it’s a right and it must be to everyone in every country, people must understand that in this generation everyone got to have some knowledge so in this essay we’ll discuss the people who think it’s useless following another’s who think that its the right thing.
Unfortunately some people think that getting a degree is useless for example,some think that it’s only useful for men because they’re the only ones who needs a job to provide for their families or themselves and an addition to that some kids lack of knowledge because they’re mothers didn’t get any, to solve this problem everyone should learn and finish their education to get the best degrees whether it’s a boy or a girl as a result, everyone will have high paid jobs and the best degrees which will be useful to the coming generations and themselves.
The other side that support the decision for everyone to be equal and educated is definitely the smart one for example, if everyone claim and suffer to get their wanted education people will make our world more and more developed and mothers will not only be trapped in the house hold area they will also be providers and even scientists because everyone needs a women mind and, and for the men they will find a outstanding jobs and careers, as a result the homes of the educated people will be full of smart kids and good parents.
In conclusion, learning must be for everyone in every country and household, In my opinion I think that the second opinion which it’a an universal right to get education and be well educated is the right choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78911564626 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48199588582 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486394557823 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.004464215 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.0 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 20.7667163134 354% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 7.06120827912 340% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151710245969 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111534215393 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074373297323 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111534215393 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074373297323 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.9 13.0946893788 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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