The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years
Summaries the info by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
While the first columnal chart provides the information about the rate of marriage and divorces of americans over the period of 30 years from 1970 to 2000, the second bar chart illustrates marital status of american adults in 1970 and 2000.
As it is the most highlighted from the graph, the divorces rate of americans was always lower than the figure of marriages over 3 decades. moreover, it is important to note that in 1970 and 2000, the percentages of married were the highest figure of the second chart.
it is noticeable that the number of marriages were larger than the rate of divorce in 30 years. Interestingly, from 1970 to 1980, the rate of marriages was exactly the same, which accounted for 2.5 million people. In 2000, marrying rate finalized at 2 million and plummeted in total 0.5 million people who wed. The break up rate did not show any significant change, except for the rate in 1980, which rose up to almost 1.5 million and then gradually fell until 2000.
moreover, married status showed the highest figure in marital status graph. married status reached more than a half in the beginning of the period and 60% in the year 2000. Followed by was the never married status, which reached 15% and 20% in 1970 and 2000, respectively. Widowed and divorced were the two lowest percentage categories, which were below 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: Married
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, then, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81896551724 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4870316139 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512931034483 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1984630076 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282473005664 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110387295922 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805880000673 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194541574811 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956197667003 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.