The charts below give information on UK spending habits for books bought over the internet .
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graph shows data on UK ways of managing money for books purchased online from 1997 to 2002. Figures are represented in million pounds. The pie chart compares four british countries according to the proportion of books bought over the web.
Overall, the amount of money spent on books which was bought online increased regularly throughout the years. Among the four countries, Northern Ireland had the lowest amount of purchased online books, While England had the highest proportion.
In 1997, 10 million pounds of books were bought online in the UK. In addition, the amount rose consistently by 5% each year for the next three years before reaching nearly 22 million pounds in 2000. However, from 2000 to 2002, the amount of money spent was growing steadily by smaller amount. Moreover, in 2002, the money spent on books via internet achieved the peak point and reached almost 25 million pounds.
Obviously, England had accounted for most of the books purchased online at 81% followed by Wales which purchased at 10%. The rate of Scotland and Northern Ireland was considered the lowest with 8% and 1% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10215053763 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46589056047 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2898654389 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113093217299 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483800156271 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470317999436 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074282531772 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447134391507 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.