The charts below show the comparison of time spent in minutes per day by UK s males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008

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The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK’s males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008.

The mixed chart illustrates the time allocated to domestic responsibilities and recreation pursuits among men and women residing in the United Kingdom during the year 2018.
Overall, it can be seen that women predominantly allocated their time towards the procurement of essential household items, completing laundry activities, and meal preparation. Conversely, men allocated a greater proportion of their time towards the maintenance and repair their time towards the maintenance and repair of household equipment. Both genders showed a preference for indoor entertainment activities, such as watching television, videos, and listening to the radio. In contrast, activities such as reading books or engaging in sports were found to be less favored by both groups.
Look at the first chart about the time spent to housework activities between the man and women in United Kingdom in 2008. It can be seen that the minutes of women spent for shopping and clothing washing or cooking is highest ( 41 minutes and 60 minutes) and lowest was fixing and repairing. Meanwhile, the action have many men tends to spent the time is that fixing and repairing, it is also depends on the good health of men ( have the same time with cooking and washing up) 40 minutes. Finally, the lowest in that chart is shopping ( 5 minutes).
In the bar chart in 2008 about the time spent to leisure activities. Men tends to increase the number. First, the first activity ( television, radio, video) of men and women were stable ( 175 and 158 minutes). However, the two last activities ( books and sport exercise) not too much difference it was 18 and 20 minutes with book and finally 15 and 11 minutes. So, we can see clearly the favored activities of men and women in this country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 6.8 324% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 290.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00689655172 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7717446439 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513793103448 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2326420083 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22382379317 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814689973636 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732728665752 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128180083689 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504508568058 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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