Before us, are represented six pie charts representing water consumption in 6 different regions around the world.
Overall, the majority of water is used in agriculture, with the exception of North America and Europe, where the industrial compound have a major role in spending. In contrast, only a significantly less amount is dedicated to houses and private consumption in all the areas studied.
Firstly, more than 70% all water is directed to agriculture, especially in Central Asia reaching 88%, while in the same place, the domestic use have the lowest of all samples in the study with only 5%. Moreover, the agriculture is less represented in Europe and North America having percentages lower than 40 in this investigation.
Furthermore, industry is more active in this department in Europe and North America with approximately 50% of the total water usage, in contrast with the remaining continents with only a maximum on 12% observed.
Finally, in all places domestic use is the least represented with less than 20%, hitting the bottom in Asia, both Central and South East, with only 7% of the statistical data.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...jority of water is used in agriculture, with the exception of North America and Europe, where the ind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1912568306 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95228662181 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7145636454 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.714285714 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104661334043 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055672184054 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472126951956 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678452622095 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523679476864 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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