The charts below represent the comparison of proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas
We can see from the data below that the percentage of total world oil resources in different areas is not the same with the proportion of annual oil consumption.
Furthermore, where the oil resources are higher the oil consumption is low and vice-verse. For example, Middle East. The percentage of oil resources in this area is 56,52%, whereas the amount of oil consumption is 6,15%. The same picture is for those countries like Canada, Africa. As it was mentioned, for other countries like Central and South America, Asia, United States, Western Europe, Australia and New Zealand, and others the data is inverted. For instance, the obvious difference was in Asia, where the percentage of oil resource is 2,89% and proportion of oil consumption is 26,21%. The only area, which showed unnoticeable difference is Eastern Europe.
Overall, percentage of oil resources to the oil consumption's have an inverse proportion.
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities .Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 67
- The table below gives information about the five small companies in Britain that came top in a survey of staff conducted by a national newspaper to find out which companies are the best to work for 63
- In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this?What problems might this cause in society? 56
- The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whe 79
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities .Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 67
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.364532019704 0.268076937826 136% => OK
Verbs: 0.0985221674877 0.116061578633 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738916256158 0.0759168565197 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0197044334975 0.0366838410393 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00985221674877 0.0131127313244 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133004926108 0.155750635184 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0147783251232 0.0379272487307 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.91928982138 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00492610837438 0.0210936926555 23% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113300492611 0.0948980150116 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00492610837438 0.00437022459523 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147783251232 0.00967000014798 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1103.0 1161.00487805 95% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.9 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30285714286 5.90752243213 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382857142857 0.337110787985 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32 0.247514529752 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24 0.171178102325 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.194285714286 0.112407865282 173% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91928982138 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548571428571 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 46.9610092307 49.3433353143 95% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4444444444 23.0094962315 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.0232853592 42.9750493124 205% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.555555556 135.714022679 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 23.0094962315 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 51.4444444444 47.7609492067 108% => OK
Elegance: 4.0 2.94281807926 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.595086611999 0.418131533498 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107370873499 0.181151798455 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0889021036204 0.0850326197045 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.646689022784 0.706616315825 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.279453146475 0.157042692854 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256221192668 0.228904883108 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191482495663 0.108899403657 176% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.438074045026 0.367819155151 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.114255926571 0.0812612215331 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.463164227431 0.316326947829 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205725165501 0.0921553760075 223% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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