The table represents comparative information about the five small companies in Britain due to the best choices to work for. Survey of staff with a national newspaper find out that these copanies are top by five categories.They are: staff numbers, proportion of male staff to female, by age under 35s and over 55s, staff turnover, staff in high income bracket.
There are some differences between the five companies in categories. For example, the highest number of staff has fifth company whereas te lowest has first. The contrast between male and female ratio showed forth company, hence it has the largest proportion of female staff and the smallest of male. As for persentage of staff aged under 35 all companies except fourth have index over 50%. However, it has the biggest persentage of workers aged over 55, while others have zero percent of it. Additionally, three of the top have staff turnover over 10% and only two of them have fewer than 10% of staff earning high incomes.
Finally, all of best companies are similar to each other, although there are some aspects, which make them different.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ese copanies are top by five categories.They are: staff numbers, proportion of male ...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... female staff and the smallest of male. As for persentage of staff aged under 35 a...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...f earning high incomes. Finally, all of best companies are similar to each other, al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, so, whereas, while, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51975659833 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8793371819 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356942726806 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140881024356 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120121463497 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240125200163 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145407981798 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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