Nowadays, we have some people, who think that the teenage years are the happiest time of the life. However, others think that the adult's life has more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
In many cases, both tims of life have their own advntages and happy moments. For those, whose the happiest memories are from teenage times, think that it was the best time of their life. On the other hand, people, who lived their the happiest moment in the adult life, think invertedly.
Teenage years are the time when you have no responsibilities, when you are no longer a child, but also not an adult. All response take parents. You feel yourself like adult and start to do everything you wish to. However, for some teenagers it is the hardest time of their life, because thier physical apperance start to change and their mood have fluctuations. They start to have problems with education and friends. This is the time when person make a fundament of his/her life, and one who did it right, think that it was the happiest time.
Therefore, adult's life is longer than teenager's. But, it is harder, because of work, many responsibilities, family, children and so on. People who think that adult years have more happiness, are mostly children, who never be an adult. However, there are people, who won these hardness and they also think so.
Overall, I am a teenager, so I can not make good decisions about adult's life, however, in my opinion, both lifes have their own happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...he life. However, others think that the adults life has more happiness, in spite of g...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. However, others think that the adults life has more happiness, in spite of gre...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: WHOSE_DT[5]
Message: Did you mean 'who's'?
Suggestion: who's
...advntages and happy moments. For those, whose the happiest memories are from teenage ...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this hardness' or 'these hardnesses'?
Suggestion: this hardness; these hardnesses
...ult. However, there are people, who won these hardness and they also think so. Overall, I a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'in many cases', 'in my opinion', 'in spite of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236842105263 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.131578947368 0.155533422707 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0756578947368 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0592105263158 0.0501214627716 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0723684210526 0.0437548338989 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0921052631579 0.122226691241 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0 0.0403226058552 0% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.58817756612 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0131578947368 0.0326793684256 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0888157894737 0.0861772015684 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00328947368421 0.021408717616 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0328947368421 0.011925033212 276% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1494.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81322957198 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27626459144 0.374742101984 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206225680934 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155642023346 0.203846283523 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0778210116732 0.137316102897 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58817756612 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.037074148 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525291828794 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.5525910909 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0625 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0972642915 49.517814964 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 127.492653851 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.814263465372 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 36.6850680934 49.1944974215 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496582896126 0.332605444948 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110554963446 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0769779041427 0.0668466124924 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.535922083 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209499140029 0.148594505496 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17952200982 0.134430193775 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140670424526 0.0742795772207 189% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.301693577835 0.324371583561 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.148615477494 0.0638462369009 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319155907906 0.228012699653 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170920200918 0.058150111329 294% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.