The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

The charts are giving the information about why humans prefer bicycle or car for go to work.

In first 12% human beings are go to work by cycle because they believe that the bycycling is faster than driving and 13 and 15% people use bycyle because to stand the cycle no need any big parking yard it can easily stand in cycle stand and no need any big space and you do not need to waste the money on fuel to drive the cycle it is free. 30% or 30% male and female believ in cycling because they used a cycle to stay healthy and fitted. Rest 30% used a cycle because cycle do not produced any kind of pollution.

The reasons people are driving for go to work are 14% are driving because it is faster than cycle and other 14% humans are driving because they carry gadgets and food. 21% think that the driving is much safer than cycling but 40% people beleive in comfort so they used a driving for this comfort. Rest 11% think the driving is safer than cycling.

Overall, the most of the worker are prefer to driving than cycle.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
... work. In first 12% human beings are go to work by cycle because they believe t...
^^
Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
... Overall, the most of the worker are prefer to driving than cycle.
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'drive'?
Suggestion: drive
...l, the most of the worker are prefer to driving than cycle.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27040816327 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.90115897706 2.65546596893 72% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494897959184 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.8719771884 43.030603864 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.625 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104178246813 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584554404587 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096026780946 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985820791417 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11829667932 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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