The two pie charts illustrate the various reasons for individuals to use a car or bicycles for traveling to work.
Overall most of the people who cycle to work, do so to maintain better health and fitness, and to contribute less pollution, while cost-effectiveness is the least concern. Majority of the car goers, on the other hand, feels more comfortable in it, however they are least concerned about distance and speed.
The first pie chart suggests health and fitness as well as environment pollution as the major concern for the cycle users making up a little below two-third of all causes at 60% combined together. the parking is the next reason at 15% followed by fast commuting at 14%. Of all, cost-effectiveness rounds off the list at 12%.
The second pie chart reveals that 40% of people use cars due to better comfort. This is followed by 21% of people who prefer four-wheelers due to long distance. 14% workers use cars to carry things with the same percentage believing cars to be faster than bicycles. Surprisingly only 11% of individuals think that car is safer than cycles.
- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days Why is this Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences 72
- Many university students live with their families, while other live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations? 61
- The charts below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...of all causes at 60% combined together. the parking is the next reason at 15% follo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, third, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87165775401 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87815812938 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.147933134 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172519218453 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639426207878 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547103386819 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108699123014 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586463112779 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.