In this modern world, a lot of people have started watching foreign movies, meanwhile, the regional and local based movies are on a steady decline. The most important reason behind this paradigm shift is globalization and internet-based movies. I strongly believe that the government must support the local film industries financially for its survival and co-existence along with foreign films.
In recent times, more and more individuals are watching foreign movies than ever before. Two major factors play a vital role in this phenomenon. Primarily, due to globalization and closer communication between different nations, art and cultural interactions do take place often. Films are among them which are made at staggering budgets and involves advanced skills and technology from the best artists around the globe. They provide a completely different experience to the viewers as compared to the regional/ national films.
Additionally, internet facility has become ubiquitous in the last few years. Internet-based movies have flourished which can be downloaded or watched online through live streaming. Moreover, these are relatively cheaper as well as contents are relatively less censored as compared to the local movies.
On the other hand, local and regional movies and films are based on the local dialect and involve the cultures and traditions of the native population and many a time reflects prevailing social problems through the movies which have a direct connection with the local audience which is received well across the generations. As the local movies face direct competition from foreign-based movies, the industry needs to be supported financially by the government for survival and for remaining relevant they need to reinvent the art of film making.
To sum up, the globalization and advent of internet-based films have severely jeopardized the existence of local movies, which must be supported financially by the government and lawmakers for the preservation and survival of regional and national film industry, else the social and the emotional connect with the local flair of this will be lost forever.
- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Whycould this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? 73
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The charts below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51671732523 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96479592455 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.0373672972 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349276747879 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10867194732 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964507516747 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198387845442 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862842182936 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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