Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (Sample Answer 2)

Submitted by faisal420 on Thu, 09/19/2019 - 15:23

Annually many languages are disappearing into oblivion. It is argued that it is better for the world to have a lesser number of languages.

There are so many different languages spoken and written worldwide, some having regional influences, while others having a global outreach. Due to the advent of modern media and social networking as well as advancement in internet technology, some languages have become much popular such as English, French, German and others to name a few. It surely helps for better communication and understanding as well as develops as a bridge between varied cultures and diversity. It also creates a better job and educational opportunities abroad. For instance if a person is fluent in English, he is more likely to be hired for a job in English speaking nations, as compared to a person who is not good at English.

The flip side of globalization is that local and regional languages and dialect suffer and some are even on the verge of extinction as even local people are reluctant to embrace it as a primary medium of education and research, leave alone making a career out of it. For instance Sanskrit is one of the oldest spoken languages in the world, however, these days very few speakers are left as most of them do not see any advantage in spending much of energy and time on it.

The impact of globalization and the resulting growth of major world languages has brought people and civilizations closer together than ever before, however it has in return severely impacted the local and regional languages, some of which are threatened to be lost forever.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...r number of languages. There are so many different languages spoken and written worldwide,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90441176471 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82460151215 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2506565628 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.4 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145247032302 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530997925081 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385231646865 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092866326866 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265576951387 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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