The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sports events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In recent years, live telecast of sports events has increased manifolds which eventually have led to a reduction in the number of spectators for watching live matches and sporting events. Although the television has enabled watching matches and sporting events very convenient and cost-effective, I do personally suggest that watching a match live has better experiences and benefits.
These days many sporting events are taking place, which is domestic, regional or at international levels. attending live matches has two major advantages. Firstly, following match in a stadium or closed arena has a completely different experience. For instance, once I got a chance to watch a test match between England and India in Chennai stadium last year. The whole experience was blissful. The atmosphere was electric and the crowd was euphoric. I was so delighted and had a wonderful time. It was a completely different experience for me.
Secondly, watching a game or sporting event and supporting a team or an athlete helps them to get motivated, boost their morale and help them perform better. For example, a team or an athlete often do better on their home ground and in front of the domestic crowd.
On the other hand, attending a live match attracts a lot of time and money. For example for a day match, one has to buy tickets in advance. Moreover one has to take leave for a day if the match is scheduled on a working day.
To sum up, television has enabled us to watch sports according to our conveniences, however, I believe that watching a match or sporting event live, among the crowd is certainly more entertaining and interesting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04727272727 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88818854264 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8910421602 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203943826506 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610085203751 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711254418484 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123646749633 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783606033239 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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