It is often argued that children should be taught at home by parents, while others believe that schools help in the development of a child. In my opinion, I believe that although there are some benefits of educating kids at home, sending them to school is more beneficial.
A growing body of research suggests that children who are educated in school have overall better development as compared to homeschooling. One key benefit is that they learn to be more disciplined in the formative years. This can lead to a disciplined life in the future. For instance, the kids follow a regular routine and timetable while going to school, thus learn managing time early in life. Additionally, they learn to interact with the kids, teachers and school staff. This often leads to better social interaction in adulthood. For example one year back my little niece used to be very shy and avoided interaction with family and friends, but she has become social and friendly after joining the preschool.
On the other hand, there is recent evidence that schooling can have a negative impact as well. Most of the schools often lack interpersonal communication. As every child has his/ her own strengths and weakness, it is impossible for a teacher to cater to the need of every single child. This can lead to a difference in performance and overall development among students in a class. For example, some kids are good at maths so they need less assistance, while some are not who may need additional help.
In conclusion, while learning at school may lack interpersonal relationships and specific attention, they help in the overall development of a child. In my opinion, despite some negative effects, I believe schools are generally beneficial.
- The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sports events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer a 61
- Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days Why is this Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences 72
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- The charts below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to manage'.
Suggestion: to manage
...table while going to school, thus learn managing time early in life. Additionally, they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00689655172 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85370610357 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6964196384 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165869482502 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580717729343 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558110471813 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117247596535 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590620464896 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.