Chorleywood is a village near London, whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
Until the establishment of the railway in 1909, Chorleywood, a village near London, has been observed to be sparsely populated from 1868 -1883, and has only shown a slowly climb to density in the following years beginning 1883 up to 1922.
Whereas the constructed railway in 1909 may have contributed to the steady increase in population growth in the village beginning 1922, the opening of the motorway in 1970 could have caused an additional influx of residents to the area. This period, from 1922 until 1970, saw the significant rise in village occupancy.
While Chorleywood has attracted more residents due to the railway and motorway, a gradual decrease in the population was evident from 1970 to 1994. This may be due to the increased mobility of villagers as they used the main roads, train and highways more and more. Because the former residents became increasingly mobile due to the ease in transportation, they may have begun to explore living in the neighboring places near Chorleywood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Until the establishment of the railway i...
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...ted from 1868 -1883, and has only shown a slowly climb to density in the following years begin...
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...lowing years beginning 1883 up to 1922. Whereas the constructed railway in 1909 ...
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...ignificant rise in village occupancy. While Chorleywood has attracted more res...
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...he neighboring places near Chorleywood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07878787879 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87592201848 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8832637489 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.666666667 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171096046641 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087149867283 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272860444484 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120190160433 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109095881349 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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