The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The chart illustrates information about the average amount of precipitation and average temperature on a monthly basis in Kolkata

It is evident from the given chart that while the largest amount of rainfall fall into the months from Jun to October, temperature seemed to be relatively higher in March, April, and May. Furthermore, the numbers for rainfall fluctuate drastically, whereas that of temperature remain relatively stable during the year.

In the first five months, average precipitation in this city increase steadily from only about 20 mm in January to 100 mm in May. Similarly, there is also an upward trend in temperature in this period, beginning with around 20 to the peak at 30 in May.

In the second stage of 3 months, while the amount of rainfall increase dramatically to reach its highest point at approximately 340 mm in July and August, figures for average temperature seem to decrease gradually to around 28 in September. On the other hand, in the final period, figures for rainfall witness a free fall to only about 10 mm and temperature experience a slight reduction back to the figure of initial month, at 20.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the final period, figures for rainfall witness a free fall to only about 10 mm ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, may, second, similarly, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90625437976 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2672509201 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.166666667 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.23603664747 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25374871535 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117033445369 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651554655298 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168525223968 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764799351881 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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