The diagram below show that the environmental issues raised by the product over its life cycle.
The diagram gives informations about the total effect on the environment during the product lifecycle. Use of the product not only reason of the environment issue but also the manufacturing of product to till end of life span also cause the environment problem.
Firstly, new product is under design and development process.It take more electricity. Then it goes for manufactur. It also require row material and energy sources.It harmfull to environment .Adding to, the production with the help of forklift and plenty of machinery which runs by the fueland directly affect on the air pollution.
During the packing the material, plastic paper more usefull and also harm to the landfield. After the finished material supply to the retailer next to the shops. The customer deal with material help of the features such as design, prise and product quality and quantity.In the last, after use of product should be disposal or it recycling further process used.Product feedback is neccessary because of it fullfill the customer needs.
Overall, Throught the whole process, material of the product directly or indirectly effect on the environment.Throughout it cause water,air and land pollutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...is under design and development process.It take more electricity. Then it goes for...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...under design and development process.It take more electricity. Then it goes for manu...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...y. Then it goes for manufactur. It also require row material and energy sources.It harm...
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Suggestion: It
...require row material and energy sources.It harmfull to environment .Adding to, the...
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Suggestion: .
...nergy sources.It harmfull to environment .Adding to, the production with the help ...
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Suggestion: Adding
...rgy sources.It harmfull to environment .Adding to, the production with the help of for...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...nery which runs by the fueland directly affect on the air pollution. During the packin...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...usefull and also harm to the landfield. After the finished material supply to the ret...
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Suggestion: In
... prise and product quality and quantity.In the last, after use of product should b...
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Message: Did you mean ''?
...he last, after use of product should be disposal or it recycling further process used.Pr...
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Suggestion: Product
...al or it recycling further process used.Product feedback is neccessary because of it fu...
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Suggestion: Throughout
...or indirectly effect on the environment.Throughout it cause water,air and land pollutions....
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , air
...he environment.Throughout it cause water,air and land pollutions.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it cause water,air and land pollutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42245989305 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07395010763 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593582887701 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.376246018 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17736630901 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648138472794 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504423658017 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104644243166 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406315138862 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.