some people work for the same organisation all their woring life. other thing that it is better to work for different organisation.
discuss both this views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many people says that working in single company for long time period provide best job security in contrast others says that change the job in different companies are more better than the work for one industries lifetime. First, i examine both of views than reach on the conclusion.
On the one hand, people argue that working in same industry for a longtime period is provide more better security however, change the company in a short time period ineffective to employee in some cases in future. It cause bed effect on their job carrier. Adding that if any employee work for same company, it is easy to understand work cycle, nature of company and rules. The major benefit is employee can get higher designation with the increment of salary. In time of celebration year in company old employee should be rewarded by award and prices.
On the other hand, the employ work in different companies should be more familiar with many people. Same type of work repeatation in single company employee feel like burden. However if work in different organisations made the man perfect. they can get vast amount of knowledge of particular work. Salary is much more important for the employee who work in different organisation so if they can work more better on the project they can also get high package. If any employee change the company time to time they enhance their life style and satisfaction of their family requirement in future.
To sum up, I agree with the employee working in same organisation for life-time, However they get job security adding to more salary rather than work for different organisation with new project and unfamiliar people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ange the job in different companies are more better than the work for one industries lifeti...
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Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ork for one industries lifetime. First, i examine both of views than reach on the...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
... same industry for a longtime period is provide more better security however, change th...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...dustry for a longtime period is provide more better security however, change the company in...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d ineffective to employee in some cases in future. It cause bed effect on their job carri...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...to employee in some cases in future. It cause bed effect on their job carrier. Adding...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ngle company employee feel like burden. However if work in different organisations made...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ent organisations made the man perfect. they can get vast amount of knowledge of par...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ferent organisation so if they can work more better on the project they can also get high p...
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Line 5, column 583, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...atisfaction of their family requirement in future. To sum up, I agree with the employe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, in contrast, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5715376961 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6068840574 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313673171513 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118351579551 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769377155928 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225656917235 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257263656544 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.