the diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The diagram illustrates how the weather’s information is forecasted by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
Overall, it is clear from the diagram that information related to weather is collected, analysed, prepared and broadcasted through 4 clear steps.
Focussing on the first and the second steps, the weather information is collected by a satellite, a radar and a drifting buoy. After that, the data is analysed and a satellite photo, a radar screen and a synoptic chart are generated through the interaction of the equipment that collects information. Next, the information is sent to an apparent computer centre.
Looking at the third and the fourth steps, the information is prepared for broadcasting at the computer centre. Following this, selected data is broadcasted by the TV newsreader, the radio, and through recorded announcements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58778625954 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30012987262 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9137869254 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199664909492 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977881243438 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812514025705 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136998863199 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796022938701 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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