The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the process of electricity generation in the hydroelectric power plant.
In general, the entire process works back and forth in a cycle. In the day, it lets the water flow from the high-level reservoir to the low-level one and produces electricity using a reversible turbine which is also responsible for pumping the water back to the high-level reservoir at night.
As displayed in the diagram, during daytime, water from the river is channeled into the high-level reservoir which then travels to the reversible turbine via an opened dam. There, water is subsequently converted into electrical power which is then lead to the generator and to the power lines follow by the national grid. The excess water is directed to the low-level reservoir. At night, the station operates backwards where water from the low-level reservoir is pumped back into the high-level one by the reversible turbine for reuse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24503311258 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83244034391 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.340728838 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101648428446 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066274354634 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826114341875 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114759641062 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095108934465 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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