The diagram below shows the process of using water to generate electricity. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pictorial depicts the phases involved in the production of electricity using water.
Overall, the generation of electric energy from water, relies on both natural and artificial processes.
From the picture, first heat from the sun causes evaporation in the sea to form clouds in the sky. Then the clouds become dense and condense resulting in rainfall which is subsequently collected in a man made reservoir, dam.
Water from the dam is channeled through a narrow tunnel fitted with an outlet/inlet valve which leads to the turbines. The force of water is used to propel the turbines, generating electricity, prior to being sent to the pump where it is pumped back into the dam. Whilst, the electricity is transmitted via overhead high voltage cables attached to towers to the transformer station. Next, is the final stage where the energy is distributed for use in houses, factories, hospitals and schools via underground cables.
- Vehicle technology is advancing rapidly and cars that drive themselves have already been developed In the near future most people will use driverless cars To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
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- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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- The diagram below shows the process of using water to generate electricity Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21710526316 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83086685186 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.5423594479 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.125 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151311543227 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06572608793 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054788782375 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984711300736 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576260351057 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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