The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
The picture illustrates the process through which bricks are produced.
Overall, it can be seen that the brick production is comprised of 9 stages. The process begins when clay is dug up and ends with bricks delivery.
In more details, clay is dug up through the use of digger machine, which is followed by clay placed onto metal grid to make it into smaller pieces. Fine clay is then carried out by mean of roller, before sand and water are added to it.
In the following stage, the mixture clays are shaped through either wire cutter or mould, after which it is dried in drying oven over 1 until 2 days. Afterwards, those bricks are put in kiln to be heated in moderate temperature (200 to 980 centigrade), then being moved to another klin to get the higher temperature (870 to 1300 centigrade). Once the stage is complete, hot bricks are cooled using cooling chamber for 2 until 3 days. Eventually, those bricks are packaged and ready to be delivered to building industry carried by truck.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...t can be seen that the brick production is comprised of 9 stages. The process begins when clay ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efore sand and water are added to it. In the following stage, the mixture clay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72159090909 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44735373194 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8053907882 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 5.23603664747 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169649571904 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774653120477 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623163880425 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121176488792 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689226537054 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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