The diagram illustrates how electricity is manufactured by coal.
In general, it is evident that the lengthy process of creating electricity contains 9 stages, beginning with supplying coal and culminating in disposing of ash.
As can be seen from the process, at the first stage, having been placed through a conveyor belt, coal is crushed into powder in a pulverizer. It is then passed to a boiler in order to boil water. Water is evaporated, which after steam is carried to a turbine via tubes and the turbine is rotated to produce energy. Subsequently, it is very important that the energy is passed to a generator, so that electricity can be created. After that, electricity is delivered to a substation in order to utilize.
Look at the process in more detail, while the turbine is being rotated, besides energy, water is also manufactured. And then, the water is placed through a condenser and is cooled by a cooling system. At the following step, steam, which is produced by water, is added to stem from the boiler so as to rotate the turbine. During the boiling time, ash is created and put into an ashing system to discharge.
- The line graph shows the sales of children’ books, adult’s fictions and educational books between 2002 and2006 in one country. 73
- Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 67
- The diagram shows how energy is produced from coal 85
- The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries China and India 59
- The graph shows Japanese average monthly salary Yen from 1953 to 1983 and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...water, is added to stem from the boiler so as to rotate the turbine. During the boiling ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, look, so, then, while, as to, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82233502538 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81296146377 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573604060914 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7232349606 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3636363636 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169046794104 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619395528067 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863604621235 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12937200315 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10338507541 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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