The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram presents how cement is produced concrete production with different equipments.
Overall, cement production involves four main stages and needs different equipments to achieve it is good appearance as a product. Thus, concrete production includes one main phase with an epic equipment that it is called concrete mixer.
The process of cement production starts with raw materials that it consist of limestone and clay, than both of raw materials crusher before come into the mixer, after obtaining many particles of powder, itu will be heated in the rotating healer, and than after it already done all process, it will be going to next step, however, it will be the final session to get into grinder to produce cement.
The second diagram presents how the concrete production is production for house and the build, that it consist of several conditions such as cement 15%, water 10%, sand 25%, and grovel 50%. All of the compositions will be processed only in concrete mixer. Machine will rotate fastly to create the concrete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'epic equipment'.
Suggestion: epic equipment
...production includes one main phase with an epic equipment that it is called concrete mixer. Th...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
... that it consist of limestone and clay, than both of raw materials crusher before co...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'materials'' or 'material's'?
Suggestion: materials'; material's
...of limestone and clay, than both of raw materials crusher before come into the mixer, aft...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...l be heated in the rotating healer, and than after it already done all process, it w...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...%, water 10%, sand 25%, and grovel 50%. All of the compositions will be processed only in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55854630006 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.592836613 43.030603864 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243898869996 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122682739793 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789433885737 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173906324407 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627668250732 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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