role model
Muhammad saw was born in Monday, 12th rabiul awal on Makkah. He was an influential person until now. He becomes very meritorious on the past, because without him we can move from the stupidity. Therefore, in this paper will tell how Muhammad SAW as a leader and as a businessman.
Many businessman was failed with his leadership, because they did not think how to give the best attitude in selling, Muhammad Saw notice every single of Moslem they have to follow Muhammad character. One thing that Muhammad Saw shows to us the way doing the business. Muhammad Saw always be honest when selling his material. it a business work that Muhammad implement ways in attitude that can be add value.
The leader must have the basic of leader. One of instance to be good leader such as Rasulullah. The leader have to learn an ethic of Rasulullah such as shidiq, amanah, tabligh, Fathanah. Furthermore, becomes the leader Its mean become the influential person to the society. Muhammad teach about attitude that we did on his daily. Every character of Muhammad that describe many things in ethic especially in leadership ethic.
To conclude, between the leader and businessman it almost the same, both of them that require to learn about good ethic. However ethic in businessman or leadership.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun businessman seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many businessmen'.
Suggestion: Many businessmen
... SAW as a leader and as a businessman. Many businessman was failed with his leadership, because...
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Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...he way doing the business. Muhammad Saw always be honest when selling his material. it a ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ys be honest when selling his material. it a business work that Muhammad implement...
^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Muhammad) must be used with a third-person verb: 'teaches'.
Suggestion: teaches
...uential person to the society. Muhammad teach about attitude that we did on his daily...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...ost the same, both of them that require to learn about good ethic. However ethic in busi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92165898618 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64362742342 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566820276498 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3706736161 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.75 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5625 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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